tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8424686960913361201.post4504465632683788908..comments2008-12-08T22:02:10.944-04:00stephendanteshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15428619004914074316stephendantes@gmail.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8424686960913361201.post-75174326517468864432008-12-08T22:02:00.000-04:002008-12-08T22:02:00.000-04:00whoa , thats some crazy word play , but more so its all real , wat u said . its a truely motivational piece .....DragonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8424686960913361201.post-39722036587013888422008-09-21T22:11:00.000-04:002008-09-21T22:11:00.000-04:00Lovely poem, very interesting. I like. Keep up the good workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8424686960913361201.post-50810936750514000022008-08-29T17:23:00.000-04:002008-08-29T17:23:00.000-04:00Nice poem!<BR/>My favorite so far.<BR/><BR/>It's difficult to critic it. What you mean is well said.<BR/><BR/>Technically... most of the lines have a rhyme with another one, except for 4 of them... but it's good like that.<BR/><BR/>I find the topic interesting. The writing is clear.Frederichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00256501174042690915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8424686960913361201.post-30901063146366746042008-08-28T13:24:00.000-04:002008-08-28T13:24:00.000-04:00this is a true poem we truely live love and die thats the courseCreative. ICH Designshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12861309457393605503noreply@blogger.com